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Yes i really it's tutorial text as i followed the tutorial hehe, but i'm still looking for one for render's etc so i could try to put effects on them.

Basic Text and brushes

Please give feedback as i'd love some help with all this =)

Personally i think i sharpened the text i bit too much hehe :S Will post an updated version later.

Ok V1 or V2 so far :S not too sure but u can definately see the change in v2
 

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Fair decent attempts pal but the first one is better.

9/10 for the first one
8/10 for second one

Overall 17/20

Work on your text
 

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Fair decent attempts pal but the first one is better.

9/10 for the first one
8/10 for second one

Overall 17/20

Work on your text

Thanks for the feedback, I am working on the text, it's just getting the right look ^.^

Same Text Added a brush to the background to see if it would look any better, feedback please?

Also blurred the original brush so the text stands out more... Not sure what you think but i hope it helped it's look
 

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RedDragonX

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Pretty good attempts, Im not too keen on how its blurred, colours look abit too dim/boring. The kind of design your doing is normally quite simple and bright without too much effects but thats only my opinion, overall good attempt.

7/10 - First
8/10 - Second
7/10 - Third
 

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The vector design is nice and has a nice use of colour. But the background you've tried and all the texting is poor. Just work on them, probally better having a gradient background or plain but work on the text. Plain is usually better.
 

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Thanks for the reply guys, and i was trying for an electric look for the text, am gonna try invert it to change the colour so it's black ^^ will post an update soon.